confusion

confusion

A Poem by lily

my eyes were blinded
my mind was clouded 
and my heart was played with 

"love"

what were we thinking?

maybe I wasn't right for you 
or it wasn't the right time
my eyes were blinded
my mind was clouded 
my heart was played with 

and somehow, 
I still love you

-lily

© 2016 lily


Author's Note

lily
too many things have been going through my mind, and I had to write them down.

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This is very touching and I can relate to this very well frnd... Love often leaves us in situations like this... Written with feelings... Well done...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love this. The simple and straight-forward message with the repetition we all see in relationships.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I can relate on the poem. Thank you for this.
Simple yet, beautiful.

He was in loved with me, but I am still figuring out if I am in parallel with his feelings. By the time I am sure that I was, he already have taken the chances with some other soulmate. He already have taken the chance that I take for granted.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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lily

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