heat

heat

A Poem by lily
"

what is going on.

"
I feel like I am melting
from the inside out

my insides are burning up

my hands are shaky 
my head is throbbing

I am burning up

but I feel 
cold

© 2015 lily


Author's Note

lily
even I don't completely understand this.

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It's been a while since I've had a poem jump out at me and speak to the inner parts of my thoughts. (if that even makes sense)
this truly was so great to read. for me, it means that the person has so much thought in them, so many emotions, so much agony and need to express who they are to the world, but they're numb to it all. numb to how they really feel. "cold" like you state in it.

great read, thank you for sharing this!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lily

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad my writing is conveying my emotions. This was so kind!!!



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It's been a while since I've had a poem jump out at me and speak to the inner parts of my thoughts. (if that even makes sense)
this truly was so great to read. for me, it means that the person has so much thought in them, so many emotions, so much agony and need to express who they are to the world, but they're numb to it all. numb to how they really feel. "cold" like you state in it.

great read, thank you for sharing this!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lily

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad my writing is conveying my emotions. This was so kind!!!

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lily
lily

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