Wow this is truly an amazing poem, I really really like this. The way you portrayed your feelings and all that is really amazing, I make a lot of this poems about existence. We are little, only a tiny fragment of the universe, even though we are that, we wonder if we mean something that our special person. The world is so vast and full of wonders and lots of people we meet everyday but we are literally nothing compared to whats beyond earth.
The last two parts of the poem summed it all up, do we mean at least a bit to a person whom we've dedicated our love to or to someone else? no one knows.
Btw: Love the authors note, sounds like something I would say! lol
Rating: 100
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
I just realized that I never said thank you for this review, so thank you. I really appreciate your .. read moreI just realized that I never said thank you for this review, so thank you. I really appreciate your thoughts.
WOW! I liked that! We are very small in the scheme of this world, yet we all play a large roll in lives of others...but we would rather mean more to everything to one person and nothing to world then be nothing to that ONE PERSON and really important in the world...At least that's me (:
Wow this is truly an amazing poem, I really really like this. The way you portrayed your feelings and all that is really amazing, I make a lot of this poems about existence. We are little, only a tiny fragment of the universe, even though we are that, we wonder if we mean something that our special person. The world is so vast and full of wonders and lots of people we meet everyday but we are literally nothing compared to whats beyond earth.
The last two parts of the poem summed it all up, do we mean at least a bit to a person whom we've dedicated our love to or to someone else? no one knows.
Btw: Love the authors note, sounds like something I would say! lol
Rating: 100
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
I just realized that I never said thank you for this review, so thank you. I really appreciate your .. read moreI just realized that I never said thank you for this review, so thank you. I really appreciate your thoughts.
You took some of my inner thoughts out of my mind with this poem. very interesting way of putting it.
I like your style. Thank you for sharing this poem.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you Sam, I'm glad that it at least made sense to someone. Thank you for your thoughts.