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A Poem by lily
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...even if things aren't as important as we thought.

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my whole existence is nothing but a small fragment of matter
I have very little
I am very little

in the grand scheme of things
we are very small beings in a huge universe

maybe things wont matter in the end
maybe what you and I think doesn't matter

but
I still care what you think
I still care about what goes on with you
and how you feel

and I hope,
even though we are so small and so non influential,
that I at least meant something to you
lily // 12:23am

© 2015 lily


Author's Note

lily
what was going on in my head? the world may never know.

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Wow this is truly an amazing poem, I really really like this. The way you portrayed your feelings and all that is really amazing, I make a lot of this poems about existence. We are little, only a tiny fragment of the universe, even though we are that, we wonder if we mean something that our special person. The world is so vast and full of wonders and lots of people we meet everyday but we are literally nothing compared to whats beyond earth.
The last two parts of the poem summed it all up, do we mean at least a bit to a person whom we've dedicated our love to or to someone else? no one knows.
Btw: Love the authors note, sounds like something I would say! lol
Rating: 100


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lily

8 Years Ago

I just realized that I never said thank you for this review, so thank you. I really appreciate your .. read more



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WOW! I liked that! We are very small in the scheme of this world, yet we all play a large roll in lives of others...but we would rather mean more to everything to one person and nothing to world then be nothing to that ONE PERSON and really important in the world...At least that's me (:

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lily

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Outstanding one.....Loved the thought frnd....

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lily

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
Wow this is truly an amazing poem, I really really like this. The way you portrayed your feelings and all that is really amazing, I make a lot of this poems about existence. We are little, only a tiny fragment of the universe, even though we are that, we wonder if we mean something that our special person. The world is so vast and full of wonders and lots of people we meet everyday but we are literally nothing compared to whats beyond earth.
The last two parts of the poem summed it all up, do we mean at least a bit to a person whom we've dedicated our love to or to someone else? no one knows.
Btw: Love the authors note, sounds like something I would say! lol
Rating: 100


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lily

8 Years Ago

I just realized that I never said thank you for this review, so thank you. I really appreciate your .. read more
You took some of my inner thoughts out of my mind with this poem. very interesting way of putting it.
I like your style. Thank you for sharing this poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lily

8 Years Ago

Thank you Sam, I'm glad that it at least made sense to someone. Thank you for your thoughts.

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Added on November 7, 2015
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Tags: life, teen, love, universe

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