My love for him

My love

 

Friends comfort  me

familly members worry about me

 I'am eating less and

crying more

I'am insecure, naive and unconfident

about myself

I'm falling apart

like the sands of a cracked hourglass

An hour glass that was craked be him

.....like how he shatted my heart

If only how much.....

how much

I'd bleed for him

to love me

just love me

I don't know how much

longer I can hold on

how long will i be able to

hold on to life

until I finally give up?

I have no hope

for the better.

I have no more intention

of living

I smile to hide

the pain, but I'am crying

inside.

I'am slowly dying inside

Author's Note

ignore grammer plz

Reviews

[just is]

I like this Ijust wrote one similar to this called Looking glass. So I can relate to this one, well written and expressed.

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I CAN FEEL RAW EMOTION HERE, THIS IS VERY WELL WRIITEN, AND I DON'T LOOK FOR GRAMMAR JUST FOR SENSE AND LOGIC THAT'S ALL THAT MATTERS, AFTER WHAT WE WRITE COMES FROM THE HEART.....AMANDA

[BEEGE]

Nice!!
Reading this I could feel the emotion
pouring out with each line.
Good stuff here young one.

BeegE

[Dalaina Renee]

I like this. You have a unquic stlye all your own.