who knows?

who know? who cares? and who thinks? who work? who loves? whos loved? whos thanked? who thanks?and who is wanting there life to end?and whos life just started?

Author's Note

sorry its so sad at the end . my brother ended is owen life 2 weeks a go

Reviews

[Relic]

I just saw this. I'm so sorry to hear about your brother. You have my condolences Charlotte.

[Charlotte]

thank very much. he lift a note to me i'm reading it later today ;(

[Sinbulvinter]

I'm very sorry to hear about your loss.
This is a very thought provoking and emotional piece, and pulls the emotions you must be feeling from the page and really catches the reader and hits them in the heart.
Very powerful for such a short work.

[Charlotte]

thank you!

[Sinbulvinter]

You're welcome.

[Ava gray]

sad charlotte, i know how much you loved your brother

[Jessica Lima]

Couple of grammar errors:

Who works not who work
Who's loved not whos loved
Who's thanked not whos thanked
Their life not there life

And after each question mark I would capitalize the first word.

Indeed lots occupy your mind though.

[Charlotte]

than's for your help but these are same "Their life not there life"

[Jessica Lima]

Noooo. lol Their implies you are talking about people like... (Don't steal their stuff). There is a place like... (Let's go over there!) There's also "They're" but it doesn't apply here.

[Charlotte]

oh ok then..

[Jessica Lima]

Sorry, this is my nerdiness coming about. You do you. Its understandable whichever way you choose to write it anyway!!!

[Charlotte]

thank you!

[Mr.Writer]

I really liked this Charlotte! Very different from other poems! These questions are also thought provoking as well!
Good job!