Fight scene

Fight scene

A Story by lily0
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Its just a fight scene that could later be added into a full story

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CLANG!!! The metal swords clashed with each other causing a loud ringing sound that could be heard for miles. “Get to the back!!” Davion yelled to the girl. Lily ran about 20 feet behind the man. “I’m ready when you are.” She yelled back at him. “Do it.” he prompted her. Lily stood there in a meditative pose while Davion stalled for more time. “How long?” he asked lily. “You have to give it a minute” she said. “I can’t hold on much longer!” at that moment he looked behind him “Get out of the way!!” she screamed at the man. Davion dived to the side and saw a large black and purple orb fly towards the guy he was fighting. The enemy had no time to run. There was a loud explosion and dirt filled the air making it impossible to see through. Lily and Davion coughed and stepped back waiting for the dust to settle. When the area finally cleared out they went to look to see at the enemy, when they got to the body they were in for a shock. There was a small girl there in front of him with a shining white orb surrounded her and the man, they were both unharmed. Davion and Lily could hardly believe what just happened. “I guess there is another one, I’m surprised I’m not the only one that can use It.” lily thought silently. Before they could even think to move they saw another white orb except this time there was golden streaks of light intertwined within it. They tried to drop to the ground to escape the full blast of it but to no avail, they got a direct hit from the full force of the attack. They toppled helplessly in circles on the ground for about 50 feet. Covered in dirt and blood, lily and Davion struggled back to their feet. “Are you okay?” Davion asked lily. “I’ll be fine just come here.” Lily pulled Davion closer to her and grabbed onto his arm. He felt a quick burst of energy flow through him. “Heal yourself first your more important.” He said to her. “You’re kidding me right? If you’re not healed than who’s going to be out in front?” She looked at him dumbly. “I guess you’re right.” He said. Before lily got a chance to say anything back to Davion She saw the other man speeding towards them with his sword drawn. Lily jumped backwards and Davion held his sword up in front of him, defending himself from the guy. “What the f**k do you want with us?” he yelled at the guy. “We want that girl!” he yelled. Davion was confused, why would they want lily? Did she do something wrong? What possible business do they have with her? He knew this was no time to be questioning things, he had to protect her. Lily casted another spell, this time directed at Davion. A white and purple orb surrounded him; he looked at her briefly and smiled. Davion rushed at the other man trying to pierce him. “Davion move out the way!!” lily screamed. There was another giant orb coming from the small girl headed his way. Davion quickly rolled to the side avoiding the attack. “I guess she only protects that swordsman.” lily thought. Lily had an idea, go for the girl and shell probably not be able to do much. Lily concentrated on the girl and fired off another attack. The girl looked straight at the attack and closed her eyes, a small barrier formed around her. Lily’s attack hit the shining light and dissipated. “How the hell are we suppose to defeat them if she can so easily block all of the attacks??” lily said to herself. Lily had to think carefully about this; it seems she can use it better than me even, she had a plan. “Davion head towards the girl” lily yelled. Davion looked back at her puzzled but did what she said; she was the brains after all. Davion ran towards the little girl and the guy with the sword sprinted after him. Lily quickly ran between the two and cast a barrier on him. The purple orb surrounded him, he kept charging with his sword pointed forward and tried to pierce the barrier, he was instantly pushed back with the same force he charged at it. “This barrier will not harm you.” lily said “however, it will hold you in and continue to weaken you until you are too tired to stand.” Davion reached the girl “Don’t hurt her” lily urged him. Davion nodded at lily and scooped the girl up. The little girl looked at him frightened and struggled to get out of his grip. Davion brought her over to lily and said “What should we do with her?” “Well we need to figure out why we are being attacked and also I am curious about her powers.”  Lily looked at Davion and nodded. “Lets take her.” Davion looked at her for a moment “Is that really a good idea?” lily didn’t answer and just looked at the girl. The girl laid there with her eyes tightly closed, she was trembling. It almost made lily sad, to think this girl seemed so powerful and untouchable and now she’s lying here helplessly. “What’s your name?” lily asked the girl. She wouldn’t even open her eyes. Lily shook her, but she still wouldn’t budge. “I guess this will be harder than we thought” she said looking at Davion. Davion drew out his sword and pointed it at the girl. She looked up at the sword, her eyes wide with terror, and let out an ear piercing scream. As she did that an enormous ball of light pulsated out of her body and sent everyone flying backwards. Lily’s barrier broke and the swordsman broke free and ran over to the girl. Lily and Davion collided into a tree.  The enemy swordsman picked up the little girl, who was all covered in dirt and looked very beaten up, and ran off.

© 2012 lily0


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lily0
This IS NOT a full story, I am trying to improve on writing action scenes and did this to see how well I can write a fight scene.

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