If
A Poem by
Tristin Eva Anderson
If
If you don't understand
don't joke
If you don't ask
I won't tell
If you don't act
nothing changes.
© 2016 Tristin Eva Anderson
Reviews
You lifted ‘if’ as just a conjunction; to a impressive new height – well done!
Posted 7 Years Ago
These lines are powerful
Wonderful lines ... It's quite intense and etched with deep thoughts..
Posted 8 Years Ago
These lines are powerful
Wonderful lines ... It's quite intense and etched with deep thoughts..
Neat and skeletal, a joy to read.
Posted 8 Years Ago
Neat and skeletal, a joy to read.
Six liner packed with vast meaning and again it flows with a message, and every word in the poem wants to speak about it louder... The last two lines is very true to any circumstances of life, if we do not act nothing will ever change, no matter how firmly we believe in something...
Sincerely
Dhiman
Posted 8 Years Ago
Six liner packed with vast meaning and again it flows with a message, and every word in the poem wants to speak about it louder... The last two lines is very true to any circumstances of life, if we do not act nothing will ever change, no matter how firmly we believe in something...
Sincerely
Dhiman
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Added on December 9, 2016
Last Updated on December 9, 2016
Tags:
Mental illness
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