If

If

A Poem by Tristin Eva Anderson

If

If you don't understand
don't joke
If you don't ask
 
I won't tell
If you don't act
nothing changes.

© 2016 Tristin Eva Anderson


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You lifted ‘if’ as just a conjunction; to a impressive new height – well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


These lines are powerful
Wonderful lines ... It's quite intense and etched with deep thoughts..

Posted 8 Years Ago


Neat and skeletal, a joy to read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Six liner packed with vast meaning and again it flows with a message, and every word in the poem wants to speak about it louder... The last two lines is very true to any circumstances of life, if we do not act nothing will ever change, no matter how firmly we believe in something...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on December 9, 2016
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