Like a Rose

The vines stick

The wispers start

The tears slide down

In the dark

Its not controled

They cant be stopped

just when you think the worse came

It gets topped

Love is like a rose

the vines and the thorns

the lies hit the bone

nothing you've felt sience you where born

the shadows come down

coming over you

when you realize

theres nothing you can do

nothing can change

and now you carry

all the blame

Loves like a rose

covered in blood

you colect you tears

and drown in the flood

Reviews

[Hello, Goodbye]

nice mixture of pure honesty with some wakeful imagery.. the poem flows nicely in its message and intent..