Feelings suck...BAD

Feelings suck...BAD

A Poem by .Lisa.Marie.

i cant explain the way i am when im around you
its a feeling so bizzare to me
different from anything else...ever
breathtaking.rare
and then theres this feeling
depressing.overwhelming.
like im watching my life
from the outside looking in
i just sit back and watch
this thing called life crumbling
slowly breaking down
a million peices of despair
it hurts.
because i know i can never
and i will never
be able to love you


so much for my happy ending..

© 2009 .Lisa.Marie.


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Don't let this one keep you from looking into the future. I assure you, the things you desire will come to you when they are supposed to. Just remember the light is love and love is the light. Don't surrender, not yet. Your heart will sing its song soon if you let it. Be gentle with yourself

~L~

Posted 14 Years Ago


This poem is amazing! People can really relate.....great job! =)

Posted 14 Years Ago


It was a nice read, but just a suggestion, try using correct grammer and capitalization, it will make the poem flow better.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awww...I really liked this as well...Made me a bit sad though...Good job, you are a good writer

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow. I love it. That is an amazing, and emotional piece of poetry. I know the feeling all too well where you want to love someone but you can't. I really connected with this. Thank you so much for sharing

Yours Truly
~ Wren

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on November 16, 2009

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Hello, I'm Lisa :) I love expressing myself through writing and my form just so happens to be poetry. I hate >.< -waking up early -school -really salty foods -when people are late to things -.. more..

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