Distant

Your 1,282 miles away
to be exact
i just wish you were here
so i could feel your touch
and breathe your air

i only hope
that one day we will meet
and all of our dreams would come true
no more wondering
or secluding ourselves
by only expressing ourselves through text
"textual relations"
im here,your there
its reality
and sometimes reality sucks

i wanna hear your voice,
in person that is
because through the phone
its just not enough to keep me satisfied
it doesnt quite seem to feed the craving i have for you
the thought never leaves my mind
this is anything but ordinary
is this real?
or just a dream in my head
your words crash over me like waves
creating an electrical rush
that surrounds me
and my gray skies brighten to blue

wishing and wishing
to see you
even though your way out
of the missouri state border line
<3

Reviews

[Lexi =]]

Aww i love this poem. I know how you feel =)

[Tori]

Oh, I love this!! I actually wrote a similar poem a while ago, but I love this one more:) It flows extraordinarily well and perfectly describes that horrible feeling of missing someone. Great job!!

[ebur™]

nice poem. it has good flow and the message of long-distance relationships being hard to handle... you described it well. well done! :)