I wont pretend..

Our poem :) takes one to write a great poem but it can take 2 to write a better one

I will never pretend to love you

my hearts always been within your reach

though it moves too purely to be held

if only it were my heart that you seek

I will never pretend to compromise

I would give you my life

like the lion lies down with the lamb

at the mercy of the one whom I thought could do no wrong

the one whom swallowed everything like the sea

the only one whom could make me feel such misery

like a cold flower raining over my heart

I wont pretend I'm your love

I won't pretend I love you

Reviews

[Suze]

I like the line "the one whom swallowed everything like the sea" - a great image!

[SuicidePact.]

ooooh the last line was awesome!

I really enjoyed reading this poem.

you just did an amazinf job in writing it, you surely have a way with words, and how you express you're 'story'

[AK]

Very nicely written, I loved the way you say I won't pretend..