Because Of you

Because Of you

A Poem by Lilmissfit

The voice in my head wispered to me
To run faster, as fast as i can
To never look back

My will as thin as a string breaks
As i give in to temptation
That proved to great to ignore

With one last glance,
My eyes tell you all of my thoughts
That will never leave my lips

The heart ache that never gave me peace,
Haunted me, as if it were a lonley stranger
with no one else to turn to

For all i had given you
Seemed never to be enough, In the end
There was nothing left, but the pain and
Resentment that lashed at my soul

In my heart i knew my scars would never heal,
But would always be a painful reminder,
For they are the only thing you ever gave me

© 2012 Lilmissfit


Author's Note

Lilmissfit
The betrayal of loved one breaks your heart everytime, but the betrayal of a loved one whos your father leaves your heart in pieces.

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Sad and beautiful. The last stanza is so raw. Your heart is broken into every line. You are the poet and the muse :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



I feel the makings of great lyricism in this, your phrasing is quite melodic.

I do, I do like it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can feel your pain through your words and how you gave more than you had to give. Whoever it was is a chump and not worthy of your emotional friendship

Posted 12 Years Ago


What a ghastly reminder: "For they (the scars) are the
only thing you ever gave me."
My heart bleeds for you . I would give anything
to help you out of this terrible nostalgia .
---- John

Posted 12 Years Ago


i loved this piece. its got lots of emotion pumped into it which makes it great :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Another great poem. It reminds us that when we walk away from a relationship that didn't for whatever reason serve us any good, we leave with wounds that can not be healed because not only do we not understand the unfair treatment we undergo but we are'nt satisfied with what it had to offer. If there is one thing that people are always reaching for it is satisfaction and we continue to reach...leaving the wounds open and raw until we catch what we was reaching for. Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is definately what happened with me and my ex...

For all i had given you
Seemed never to be enough, In the end
There was nothing left, but the pain and
Resentment that lashed at my soul

*cries*......................

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Lilmissfit

Wapheton, ND



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