Suicide

She lived in her own dark place

Under all her pain 

I watched her as she tumbled

Crashing into the shadow that

Intended to keep her there

Drowning into her own torment until she just

Ended It

Author's Note

enjoy

Reviews

[Sharon]

This poem expresses much emotion is such simple words. It creates a better understandable thought to the reader. This is also sad and true. It is truly an interesting topic but I like how you were able to explain it so easily.

[Nami Machae]

thank you so much

[Sharon]

Your welcome! :)

[Renée]

I find it odd... to say enjoy..when it is a poem about suicide.. deeply sad write to say the least

[Graveyardfuck]

Sounds like me. Love this write. :)

[Nami Machae]

thank you :)