Turbos N Time

My kids in mind...

Turbos N Time

Its my turn, its my rhyme... 
How to bring up kids, in these days n times? 
Wondering if I am doing it right... 
wondering if I fail..
 
Is my all enough, to bring up children right...  
To raise gods children up right on these long nights..
Will she know the future... heck who knows.. 
Learn from the past, n mind the moms guides.. 
Learn from the errors and learn from the signs... 

How one thing can f**k up a great mind... 
How will I know the path, how will I tell.. 
Just steady n forward is all to be said..

Thinking am I right, or am I wrong.. 
That's a whole lot these days n times.. 
Will she find her dreams, will he find his voice.. 
Will they make there presence known upon the earth... 

There can be no delays, there can be no time...
To grasp the present and fight for the right.. 
To live is an adventure...
To learn is wisdom 
To love beyond all flaws, is gods beauty... 

By: Lilly Thorn

Reviews

[Echoes of Eros]

We can sense your beautiful heart longing for all that is good, and yes, to live the adventure that each day brings. May all of us learn to love beyond the flaws!

[lillythorn]

Thank you... and yes I desire for good to concur evil.. and love to run wild like the dandelion seeds in a wind storm.. :) thank you

[Mike Emil]

NARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!
it's only MY time to rhyme and turn
when you bring a bottle of brandy around we will talk more
HAI!!!

[lillythorn]

I will rhyme in time as I please... Just to feel a gentle breeze.... No brandy for you ;)

[Mike Emil]

no brandy???
you play an uncareful game with me, girl
you had better learn your place and bring saki too!!!
HAI!!!

[Sunset Girl]

Very thoughtful and well said; can't wait to see more.

[lillythorn]

Thank you, Im still kinda fumbling through my grove... and I hope to post more soon... :) keep smiling

[gombeggar]

well...bout thyme we got a peep outta u, lily :) very passioned words...lotta thoughts going on here...wanna see more!!!

[lillythorn]

Peep Peep!! and Thank you... I had one jumbled mind the night, my mind rhymed this time.... :) Thank you... keep your words of massive power rolling out as well.. Really enjoy your work... ;)