Aster

Walking in a field full of

Asters

Surrounded by
White, pink, lavender, and red

What beautiful flowers they are 

How they flow in the wind

It almost looks like god painted them by hand

Each petal a strip of colour dancing in the sky

Bright against the blue

Forming a circle of ovals, protecting the yellow inside

It's like

The yellow is a

castle

And the petals are the walls 

They seem too beautiful

To ever leave them.

But I know

It's time to go home.

Author's Note

I wrote this with Emily in Pairing Up Poetry, the italic words are mine.
Emily: http://www.writerscafe.org/emilyMarie

Reviews

[Hazel Euy]

Felecity , your writing has grown from level one to level one thousand . That was beautiful.

[SpiceCookie]

Thanks! :):):) Emily worked on it with me in Pairing Up Poetry.

[jeannemarie coulter]

this is a beautiful inspired poem...

[SpiceCookie]

thanks! Emily worked with me! :)