Ocean

The ocean. The blue, watery breeze that can be so rough, or so calm.

Massive waves far out,
baby waves near the sand.
Water blue
and crystal.
A rainbow under the water
made of coral reefs
with fish darting in and out.
The sun shining
bright overhead.
A wonderful day
to hang out
by the ocean.
A perfect day to splash in the
swooshing water
and float.

Reviews

[DiverseVoices]

Great poem! I love the way you weaved the words together. Keep writing!

[SpiceCookie]

Thank you! :D

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing description in your words. Your words took me to my favorite place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[SpiceCookie]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.

[Rikkevi Rue]

but doesn't the ocean just bring out the wonderment and openness of expression in one? I recently traveled up the coast of California and I stopped so many times to simply embrace the awe and uplifting spirituality of the ocean. I hereby invoke the bond of all ocean lovers!

Your write is simple and articulates the emotion that is often drawn forth from the beauty and power of this wonderful force of nature.

You write well and excel where you communicate in a way that evokes the emotions others harbor within. Very nice.

[SpiceCookie]

thank you, that means alot to me! :)

[Melinda McQueen]

You painted such a beautiful picture.
A lovely poem.

[SpiceCookie]

thank you!

[Eugene Finley]

Yeah; thanks for that little break from work, Felicity.

[SpiceCookie]

:) ur welcome!

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What a beautiful tranquil picture you wrote here, dear poet :)

[SpiceCookie]

thank you!

[Hazel Euy]

yes.it is very soothing and calming for someone to read