Cake

What does cake taste like to you?

My mouth touches a cloud.
It's sweet, soft,
and covered with a creamy and fluffy substance.
It carries me up into the sky...
I'm flying too high
to want to come down.

Reviews

[¿]

Now! Who's gonna get me a slice of cake?!
Am fell flat on the image of cake and so on your poem...the cloud like feeling while having cake is out of the world totally...mmmmmmmm!!😋🍰

[SpiceCookie]

Haha thank you :D

[¿]

Wc😊...!!!

[Donna]

Very cute poem! I love the picture of the slice of cake, looks delicious!

[SpiceCookie]

Thanks! :)

[NinjaShadowWolf]

I really want cake now... Eating cake really is like eating a cloud. Thank for the sweet poem.

[SpiceCookie]

Thanks for the nice review! :)

[Hazel Euy]

So fluffy! :) This is so short and sweet!

[SpiceCookie]

thanks! :)

[Bear]

Flying high on the wings of a sugar rush, nice poem and very relatable as we have all been there :~)

[SpiceCookie]

thank you :)

[Hazel Euy]

you described it exactly like what I feel when eating cake . :)

[SpiceCookie]

Thanks! :)