What is Real? Questions

What is Real? Questions

A Poem by Sonya
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What is real, is the theme of the story, I'm having some doubts in my life, and for quite awhile, and I'm starting to drift.

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                          I sit here wondering, what is Heaven, what is Hell?

                          Is God one to be loved, or feared?

                          What was Lucifer's true intention?

                          Why does it seem that our supposed Gaurdian Angel fade away?

                          Is it possible to say one's name in vain?

                          More or less, here I live, on this Earth, haunted by questions, no one can answer to my beliefs...

© 2009 Sonya


Author's Note

Sonya
Not good, but it feels nice to relieve this stuff some how.

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You answered them within your last line. Beliefs. That is all they are. We can believe in anything we want. Doesn't make it real nor does it make it unreal. They are just that. Beliefs. Once one realizes this nothing is real as is everything. I know that sounds like I am running in circles with this, but if you dig deep you WILL understand it. Don't drift. Float. Kudos to you.

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I like this...lots of ppl wonder about these things...and most of them cant be answered.
Great Job

Posted 15 Years Ago


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I think writing is a sort of therapy......it doesn't matter if it doesn't make sense, or it doesn't rhyme or flow,,,,when u get it all out on paper it just feels good.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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These questions are very honest questions. I love how you set up the whole poem, it goes well with the theme. This kind of work, work from the heart and mind, it's the best kind. You really did a great job on it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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very good i love it, the questions are all i used to ask myself.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Wow! Your poem was amazing! It was fantastic! It was a very well written poem! I loved it! :D

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You answered them within your last line. Beliefs. That is all they are. We can believe in anything we want. Doesn't make it real nor does it make it unreal. They are just that. Beliefs. Once one realizes this nothing is real as is everything. I know that sounds like I am running in circles with this, but if you dig deep you WILL understand it. Don't drift. Float. Kudos to you.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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