Broken

She waits, broken and afraid, as her lover once again slips through the cracks between her fingers. She tried so hard to keep him this time, but no one understands the thoughts that lurk behind her eyes, not even him, and in the end she proved to be to broken for even his skilled hands to fix... Now, she resides in a lonely castle, far from reality, lost in a sea of desperate tears. The fear takes hold as the walls close in, crushing her heart with their weight, holding her in place, never letting her forget the love she lost, and the lies she creates... She will forever remain the broken lover lost within the shadows...

Author's Note

Creative criticism welcome... This is the first thing I have written in awhile so I'm kind of rusty I guess... Please tell me what you think