You never knew me

Kiki - Me

HchiIk - My Hollow

Both of us

 

you never knew me 

we never did

you never trust me

we will never trust you

why do you hate me?

because we can

im falling apart

then go and die

i want my life back

you will never will

i miss my world

dont come back

just leave me alone

go away....far away from us

never come back

you were never one of us

i hate you

oh so much

i was never like you

i dont care anymore

i want to die

and release my soul

to freedom

you're hurt

you're in pain

big deal queen

you're vain

im not

i rule

you die

a hollow person

doesn't get everything

im hurt

im in pain

i care for

the people i love

i've always hated you

you kept me traped

inside that inner world of yours

it kills me

good

you shall die

all the queen's horses

all the queen's men

we dont hail to the queen

im alive and good

im still the queen

i live for him

i live for them

Together forever

Our goal is

FREEDOM

 

Reviews

[Danny Hollow]

its more like me fighting with my hollow

[jumbie's #1 fan]

I like how this goes back and forth between two people. The image i get is a lonely girl thinking and that little voice in her head telling her she's not good enough. The colors of the text really distinguish the two feelings. Very good poem