Do you think

Do you think

A Poem by lildot
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A subjective question about your inner self

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Do you think you might put yourself in jeopardy because you are the angry one?
…. The one carrying that guilt. Helplessness. What about the innocent?

No one listens. Nothing makes sense.

How many times?

Helplessness.

You become the victim. Why? Why, because of why?

No one listens.

It’s over. Done. Reality. It’s real. Life prevails. Death is final. Heroes. Why? Good prevails despite the adversity.

But… you listen … you keep prevailing! …despite those who continue to take you down…. HOPE… ‘lil dot 2023

© 2023 lildot


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You have opened up and shared what many others feel in their own unique way: questioning Self when perhaps there is more a need to accept Self as being a One Off being on our planet. Perhaps? Your writing is conversation, thoughts, pouring gently. Is fascinating and somehow.. inspiring, lildot.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lildot

1 Year Ago

Thank you … finding a way to give others permission to open up and share despite all the guilt ….. read more
emmajoygreen

1 Year Ago

That way has to be the beginning and end of sadness and stress, surely? Your post is memorable.



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Helplessness is tragic. Somehow helping hands come in distress. We don't know death is final. It's just a belief like birth. Do we born really? Good work 👍

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I wish more people would learn to have such inner conversations, especially in stressful periods. It might result in fewer mass shootings.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I have to think on those. Simply put forward questions.
Every one has to find answers.

Posted 1 Year Ago


You have opened up and shared what many others feel in their own unique way: questioning Self when perhaps there is more a need to accept Self as being a One Off being on our planet. Perhaps? Your writing is conversation, thoughts, pouring gently. Is fascinating and somehow.. inspiring, lildot.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lildot

1 Year Ago

Thank you … finding a way to give others permission to open up and share despite all the guilt ….. read more
emmajoygreen

1 Year Ago

That way has to be the beginning and end of sadness and stress, surely? Your post is memorable.

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Added on November 23, 2022
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lildot
lildot

Fort Myers, FL



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Love to write and read. Have spent all my life trying to figure out who I am and trying to find and have purpose. I struggle with my self confidence at times, and fight that struggle by helping othe.. more..

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