If being

If being submissive sends 

pleasure down my mans spine,

I will be submissive for my man,

If being on my knees drives the

inner monsters hiding behind the 

shadows of innocents my man 

reflects, I will be on my knees for 

my man

If it pleases him to converge my 

body, I will offer him my sides,

my arms, my beauty that only he

would set eyes on

If pleasure initiates out of my 

mans insides, I will continue 

to pleasure my soul mate, I 

will continue to be amenable

to my lover

If he wants to touch, my 

man will touch, touching

my ribs, my stomach, feeling

my excitement wonder up

in his arms, he will touch, 

he will touch  the way the 

sun kisses our skin, the 

way our tongues touch

our teeth, the way the 

moon touches our eyes 

If my man wants to 

teach me, I will let him

teach me, because my man

taught me that true 

love has a face on this 

earth, my baby taught me

that strawberry milkshakes

taste so much better in the 

winter, my lover taught 

me that sex doesn't only 

have to be in the bedroom,

it can be at our favorite 

restaurant, in our car 

or even in the basement.

If being in love with a 

dominate man means

being submissive, I will 

be submissive for my 

man.  

Reviews

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

What to think about this, I see how you would do anything for your man and if sacrificing everything is needed then you would do it, but what of him? Is the extra mile stretched or just falls short to his feet? I like the poem it just makes me wonder, the woman here deserves a man of equal share. Good poem

[Lilaa]

There is equal share, I just said it in my point of view. He'd do the same no doubt.
Thanks for the review :)

[McBear]

Very beautiful. A message to other girls out there. You are truly a role model to other women of what a true lover is. I can relate to this: my girlfriend and I have been long distance for about a year now. To this day, she will do anything to see me happy. Simply because she wants her lover to be happy with her. You remind me of my girlfriend; such amazing people.

[Chris]

You ARE a "Master's miss..." and your poem is well worthy and understood.

[Inject Positivity]

Strong message to the society.....A different concept, unique imagery with very good presentation....Well thought out too....Loved the ending most.....Full ratings!!!!