Crush

I see you.

Do you see me?

I watch you

your every step

wanting you to turn

and walk to me.

But you wouldn't.

I am a child

and you are a man

I wish for you

at nights I dream of you

I want you.

But do you even know me?

You glance at me

but its only a glance.

I wish I could hold you

and you hold me too.

You look at me

I melt.

You are my crush.

 

Reviews

[Isabella Disney]

This really touched me. Thank you.

[Diversity]

ohh and this is alexandrea this is my other account since my original wont work

[Diversity]

actualy this was written at a time where i was in a happy relationship my friends would tell me of their crushes and thats what i used for this poem

[.:Arianna:.]

Excellent write. I can really relate to this poem, i have been tormented by the exact same love and despair, the agony of needing someone you cannot have, for he does not even see you. Beautiful, i am looking forward to more poems of yours ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

Sweet and beautiful words of desire. Those crushes will stay with you forever. The most terrible ones are the crushes we never dare to test. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Matthew vonHone]

Nice job, well done. I can picture this girl in agony over the man she's crushing on. Very nicely done.

[Lime-Eater]

This is an excellent poem! It really shows how you feel when you have a crush, Great Job! :)