secrets

Darkest secrets within,
playing hard to get,
ain't she putting on a show.
she looks so real
painting her toenails,
sways her hips
Ignores me by the door.
disregards my gesture's
won't let me notice
is it happy or sad
that heart no one will know.
she dresses in style,
that six inch heels
puts on some perfume,
she's a branded soul.
her eyes speaks,
words that none will hear,
she looks calm,
The queen of ace..!

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

quite interesting and full of suspense. liked the line when you say.. "Swaying her lips.."

being an erotic write, that's absolutely quite exotic to me, perhaps, unfortunately, your poetry ain't that erotic. it's 'bout the beauty of hidden doll so i guess, it's really well painted upon the breath of every verse you get to lick down here around. great job!

[Lijo Jose]

Thankyou so much😍
Your reviews are very much appreciated😘

[Ashish]

That's wonderful...
The descriptions are attractive..
Last four lines were beautiful
Thank you for sharing :)

[Lijo Jose]

Thankyou so much dear.
M glad you liked it