reclusive endeavor?

shows great uncertainty

unpublished
can't write
not trying

all this
and more
i i sprinkle stir
into my coffee

Author's Note

aye aye

Reviews

[The Half-Blood Princes]

"but you have a whole briefcase full of stunning words, just dying to get out . "
This.
No wait. Not that.
You shouldn't write just for the sake of writing. It's forced that way, and the audience can tell.
"unpublished
can't write
not trying"
You said it right there. Not trying. And it's obvious.
Please, try.
AND GRAMMAR

[Tracie Skarbo]

This reminds me of some of my rejections. But we must lift our heads and hearts and push out into the windy world of words again. Great job!

[Emily B]

how's the briefcase? I imagine there are a dozen gems in there dying for want of air and sun.

[Raef C. Boylan]

i i = aye aye, or hesitation/nervousness/weariness?

it's a sad little ditty, sir - you listen to Emily Burns and get yer arse into gear :-)

[Emily B]

but you have a whole briefcase full of stunning words, just dying to get out . . .

I wouldn't be surprised to find you have your own pocket muse