SORROWEDmmxii-sorrowedMMXII

SORROWEDmmxii-sorrowedMMXII

A Poem by mick weller
"

still yet to be remembered..?

"

Me heart;

she head.

 

Apart:

separated.

© 2008 mick weller


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Clever and original. I read: You all emotion, she all intellect, logic. Or I read the larger concept that you who were one, are done. I like that for once the man is the heart here. Yes, that's great to know, if I am on to anything true here. So much packed in, I like to let my imagination wander around those few words - they stand strong.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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hmmm two opposites attract then lose the magnitism. Guess this was a case of physical attraction that never seems to have enough pull to last through the erosion of time. Perhaps a she heart next time would see you through... :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Clever and original. I read: You all emotion, she all intellect, logic. Or I read the larger concept that you who were one, are done. I like that for once the man is the heart here. Yes, that's great to know, if I am on to anything true here. So much packed in, I like to let my imagination wander around those few words - they stand strong.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

He said, she said; but they're still apart.

Six words, but they probably garnered as much conscious thought as anything I read today.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 5, 2008
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