nonsense tears

What is left of real,

when reality lets you down?

Where is the sense in tears,

when you're supposed to be the clown?

Reviews

[MagiCrystal]

an amazing true... and yet so painful .. love it

[Emily B]

Very seldom do I read so much in so little. An amazing little write.

[C. Harter Amos]

Heavy duty write for such a short piece. Don't we tend to close down when we're hurt? Don't we fight the urge to cry because it's not the 'happy' us we try to show the world? There's a whole thesis to be written on what's behind your four lines here. Kudos for being able to do that. Nicely done.

[Thomas James Martin]

I enjoyed the 'sense" of this. Admire the economy of expression. Nicely done, Mick.
Tom