feeling good..?

feeling good..?

A Poem by mick weller
"

inspired by the heart for the heart...

"

 

'feel good about myself –

   instilled confidence in me -

        only in little ways but important

            non-the-less…'

 

'feel good about myself – instilled confidence in me - only in little ways but important non-the-less…'

 

'feel good about myself – instilled confidence in me - only in little ways but important non-the-less…'

 

'feel good about myself – instilled confidence in me? - only in little ways but important non-the-less…'

little ways?

...the less? the less?

important non-the-less… important non-the-less… important non-the-less… important non-the-less…

 

'does she care ... does anybody care non-the-less…'

'does she care ... does she care - does anybody care non-the-less…'

'does she care ... does anybody care non-the-less…'

'anybody care?

anybody care non-the-less…'

 

important non-the-less…

important non-the-less…

important non-the-less…

 important non-the-less?

 

wow, wow wow wowwowwowwowwowwwsswow swoow soowowswishswishishwishswishshishishish....

(monotone high pitched whistle) white noise=dead

 

 

thump

 

 

© 2008 mick weller


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'Tis not love's going hurt my days.
But that it went in little ways.
--Edna St. Vincent Millay





Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hmm, I don't know ...
kind of thinking about composition... and it not working ...
and it all going 'tits up' ...
yeah - 'tits up'
that 'letter' that gets worked on... but never gets sent..?
It's more 'take off' I'm outta here..?
yeah - losing the plot... when there never was a plot to lose..?

Posted 16 Years Ago



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