Mystification

Cry of a bewildered soul

Every time I blink

I feel  the moisture

Encircling not just the cores of my eyelids

But my entire manifestation

It would always remain a dampness

A tear cannot escape

It always waits

For an embrace

Many a time I speculate

Am I the only one to hold my fire

When the energy that is contained in me

Threatens to explode

I am confused

Why should I restrain myself

It is not pain that engulfs me

I never feel it

It is the love

That makes me vulnerable

The secrets that are open

Lie randomly in walls and streets

I smell love and blood emanating

From these hidden mysteries

Everything seems connected and separate at once

Why is this I do not know.

Author's Note

An outburst of feelings

Reviews

[Mylifeinheartbeats]

This poem is ridiculously emotional. Not as in: Oh, this is ridiculous, but more like: Wow, my heart started beating faster reading it. It's like being at the top of a hill and going down, gaining speed as you reach the bottom, and tumbling to a halt with the sudden realization that there's another hill in front of you.
Most excellent, dear.

[Weasley]

Oh my god I freaking love this!

[zainul]

Lovely work

[CecilA]

Neha,

Your poem is so intensely emotional and so well written that I can feel the pain. Great job. Not every writer can convey emotion in a manner such as you.

Would you consider changing your last line to: 'Why this is I do not know.'?

Just my interpretation not a criticism.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.

Sincerely, Cecil

[Neha]

ha ha thanks a lot
I wrote this in an informal manner so don't suited my flow. But you are right, "do not"makes it look better!

[CecilA]

I believe the rhythm is better. Great job. If you celebrate Christmas, have a joyous one filled with love.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

beautiful , and deep really ...

[KillerWithWords]

Well done.
I sympathize with the broken woman lying beside the water. You convey her emotions wonderfully.