poor fool

there is a girl I once knew

she was a poor little fool

she would go to church and sit in the pew

and after that she would go to school

she had no friends

because people can be cruel

and her soul she bends

hoping to be cool 

in disapproval they would stare

mockingly they would shout.

she had no one who seemed to care

even when she cried out loud

but after a wile a light came on

and her tears started to dry

 she was reborn

when she knew it was a lie

she was beautiful

and she was free

she was immovable

she was me

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

Your words prove once and for all that staring into the mirror and seeing one's considered vanity is the only way to see self in the best light at the very best time - suddenly. Beautiful and wise words, my friend called 'me'.

[LVW]

thank you so much. you bless me with your words

[Silmara McGarry]

Ohhh life experiences in this planet can be many times truly hard for a girl with only God truly caring! Well expressed poem and a splendid ending!
Very well done dear!
All best:-)

[LVW]

Thank you so much for you beautiful supporting words. And thank you for commenting.

[Arundass TP]

A well penned life experience. I feel this is a masterpiece writing. Loved it

[LVW]

Thank you so much I appreciate your kind words.

[Arundass TP]

Welcome friend 😊

[Arundass TP]

You can make it s beautiful script for s film. All the best.

[LVW]

thank you, friend. I will consider it.

[Tumi]

Well written
To be honest I didn't see that last lime coming twas perfect
I enjoyed reading

[LVW]

To be honest in my life I didn't see that last line coming either. It is the story of all our lives.