words of ink

there is much to find 

I would think

when you find intertwined

words of ink

when your heart is given

and your mind lays bare

many may listen

to your field of care

words of pain 

and words of joy

let it fall like rain

for all to enjoy

and some might come

with the intent to destroy

but be numb

you are not a toy.

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

This is a poignant poem about letting your words flow wherever they come from, your heart, your mind….. even though it’s not appreciated….” Words of pain, words of joy….”let it fall like rain”….. lovely
Warmly
B🌷

[LVW]

Thank you so much. lovely words to hear.

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome🌷
Warmly, B

[jacob erin-cilberto]

This really works...simple lines that portray the complicated state of giving a heart both in love and in words of love...
nicely done,
j.

[LVW]

thank you so much Jacob. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Marie]

You have captured in essence the power of words which are inked. Some are inked with good intent and others are not inked with good intent. Words can cause pain or joy whether inked or spoken. A thought provoking poem penned with poetic skill. I so enjoyed reading and thank you for sharing, dear poet... Lovely work!

[LVW]

thank you so much. It truly means a lot.

[Marie]

Most welcome always, dear poet...

[Arundass TP]

Beautifully written poem. Enjoyed reading 👍

[LVW]

you bless me with your words thank you so much

[Arundass TP]

Welcome friend

[berenongur]

The last part definitely left a scar on my body. Definitely very successful. Good luck my friend

[LVW]

I appreciate your read and I'm so glad that I managed to touch you with my words. thank you for taking the time to comment. it made my day.

[tumi]

very encouraging words found in every lines of you writing
very good

[LVW]

thank you so much. I appreciate you taking the time to comment. it means the world to me.