A Perfect LoveA Poem by jay
flowing softly before my very eyes, and me not sure whats going on, and then it hits me like a rolling train, this is how a perfect love takes shape. long silky lumonous hair eyes full of love, and compassion for this weary soul, a face soft as a new fallen snow, looking in my direction,bringing me on, showing me how a perfect love takes form. © 2008 jayReviews
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2 Reviews Added on October 13, 2008 Authorjaybristol, TNAboutIve just put up my first poem and I would like to hear what you think of it, and if you wish you can write me if you want to talk as well. I hope to hear from all of you soon = ) more..Writing
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