About ghosts

About ghosts

A Story by Lydia...
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A short, sad love story

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May you start to feel again the priorities of this world and of your body, because you are a soul that borrows a body. The souls who lost the bodies are called ghosts, but in truth, they just want another one. They don't feel like this life was fulfilled, so they wanted another one. In a strange way, usually these ghosts couldn't find the love or the protection of the loved ones. In my case, I just want to see him once again, to feel that he's still fine. But, it took me a while until I got used to the life of ghost.

It's good that the people don't notice you, but now you can see the other ghosts too. And they are scary. I had to stop breathing because I have no lungs; I had to stop looking in every mirror that I saw because I have no appearance.

There was him, not feeling bad or good. I could see his soul which was still glowing red, which meant that it's warm. The other ghosts told me that we were all blue: we have no warmth. I had to get used with the feeling of being cold and not feeling bad for everyone.

I could see blue souls în people's bodies, and they were many.

But his soul was red, which was a huge relief for me. O, I was happy knowing he hadn't changed at all. I wonder if his soul could feel me. I don't know.

© 2015 Lydia...


Author's Note

Lydia...
please ignore grammar problems, I'm not a native speaker :)

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Skillful descriptions reasoned and articulated

This story makes sense which in many cases persons ignore

Is true that many ghosts when they were alive they lived the time that God permitted them

And is a sin when ghosts try to posses persons without permission and at that point those ghosts become fugitives in the other world because they tried to invade the privacy of live persons in this world

What those ghosts can do is look for mediums that specialize in those things and they shouldnt bother or interfere without permission in the life of the living

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lydia...

9 Years Ago

If it would be like this, it wouldn't be a short story anymore :) I actually want to underline the g.. read more

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Added on January 16, 2015
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Lydia...
Lydia...

Iasi, Nord- East, Romania



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I'm an young, aspirant writer who can do a lot. Writing is my favorite hobby, and I'm not from an English speaking country, so don't mind my bad grammar. I'm trying hard XD more..

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