The Blue Note

For my only love

I love

making lists

and

writing

vertically

and your contention

that people

are basically good

and that

SOMETHING

should be done

but you're not sure

what.

 

You're a calm note

in a musically mad world. 

Reviews

[Lorraine]

Short but so sweet. The last line sure gave the best impact for it is such a bold declaration. Also I'm amazed at how the 'I' suddenly turned into 'you' without appearing too sudden.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[Zatoichi]

a calm note
in a musically mad world.

I hope you don't mind that this shall be my epitaph. Z

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

This is an unusual theme..and very nice...love the last line...

[Ice QueenJen]

this was a great way to explain your style of writing, and how we should be doing something. good job Libby

[theludus]

I think I like your writing too. I've read a few and as far as I can see you've got plenty of goodstuff there. It's the kind of work I'd like to offer thoughts on and so where that goes. Just a general statement. Short stuff should have punch and ecomony of movement. You are getting that done in places.

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

Pieces like these always remind me of the great art of poetry writing.
Well done Libby

Vincent