The Blue Note

For my only love

I love

making lists

and

writing

vertically

and your contention

that people

are basically good

and that

SOMETHING

should be done

but you're not sure

what.

 

You're a calm note

in a musically mad world. 

Reviews

[Angi]

Wonderfully done! Short, sharp poetry that makes me feel something is the stuff I love. You did it here. The last two lines just make sense of it all. Angi~

[Amy B.]

This makes me smile :)

[Ubiquitous]

I love the last two lines, the juxtaposition is great and really makes them stand out. I like the short nature of your poetry, because you are able to pack a substantial message in a small amount of words that fit perfectly together. Well done :)

[The Flawed]

I like this, its honest and bare to the bone,
But hay what do I know?
Well done.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Beautiful.

[joshua deathdealer]

Absolutely wonderful!! I love it.

[RSalassi]

The writer is so obviously in love, if not with a young man then with life, but I'd bet she's in love with both. Delightful writing. Thanks. I loved this.

[Coyote Poetry]

A kind and hopeful poem. I like the flow and the story in your words. The ending made the poem complete. Thank you for the amazing poem.
Coyote

[Emily B]

oh, wonderful!!!