I lie

I

lie

 

 

next

to

you

and

wonder

Reviews

[Emily B]

wonder is the biggest word of all sometimes

but, oh, what did Zatoichi do to your thought? . . . Lots of room for wondering.

[mope]

wanderful

[Zatoichi]

I
wonder
next
to
you

and
lie.

[O!]

ooooooooooo....gotta love this! ....i took this figuratively... :-)

x,
O!

[theludus]

I like this, I mean, you couldn't say it earns a nobel prize for literature, but I very much enjoy poetry that has a bit of thought gone into it, and here, there are places this could go. Is she lying? Are they both lying, where's this wonder coming from and why is she detached from it? is there any wonder at all, and the more you involve yourself in those complexities the more the poem has seemed to be rewarding. I like this kind of stuff.

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

What I admire about this piece Libby is this "foundational experience" that still leads to "nowhere". Well crafted! Thanks for sharing that experience with us.

Best regards,
Vincent

[DownTheDrain]

Very cool.
You've flipped the norm.
I like it.

[Coyote Poetry]

It is amazing how one words can change a meaning of something. I like these 7 words. A beginning and the end in seven words. Takes a lot of skill. Thank you.
Coyote