MY love is gone

My first attempt at a poem, hopefully someone likes it

As he glared at the picture with desperation in his eyes,       

She could not hear his woeful cries.

Never changing, her picture still smiles

Even after years of time's trials.

He should not weep, But he could not sleep, 

For when he fell in love he took a mighty leap.

A fool chasing happiness through the dark,

Eyes lit by that special spark.

Which soon faded as joy can never last,

Briefly my smile was genuine, not just a mask

Your love is not something I regret,

Yet I use this bottle to try and forget.

For you're enjoying your eternal shine ,among the stars in the skies,

But I'm here, just fine, you'd know I was telling lies

 

You left me here feeling all alone, 

Still calling to hear voice before the tone.

If only I could take back time and cut you loose,

And beg you baby, stay away from that forlorn noose 

Author's Note

Im aware it's not all that great, I tried though

Reviews

[Farah Husain]

Actually it is that great. It expresses feelings beautifully and is a very sad poem :' (

[AmateurWriter01]

Wow there was a lot of feeling in this. You can really feel the pain in this. I think you did a great job writing this