the sun.

Look upon the great heavens, 
where space and time make love, 
the moon, 
their child, 
a prodigy,
the sun, 
waking up his parents with a fiery scream,
every morning, 
every night,
waiting for recognition, 
into the cosmos, 
spinning,
basking, 
lighting his torch as he rages against the world.

Author's Note

Critiques of any form are welcome.

Reviews

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This is very positive and poetic. Celebration life and love. Maybe is too short . But still have it quiet powerful meaning.