i enjoyed the build up to the story, yet i was yearning for more. keep writing!! this is good stuff waiting to brew to something mgnificent! like great beer, it needs the right ingredients, time and effort to brew into something tasty. keep going darl!
i enjoyed the build up to the story, yet i was yearning for more. keep writing!! this is good stuff waiting to brew to something mgnificent! like great beer, it needs the right ingredients, time and effort to brew into something tasty. keep going darl!
The story is interesting. Are you doing to continue it? Then I can really have a sense of the story.
But I will say is look over your work before publishing it. It is good but there are some sentences that didn't make any sense.
Keep up the good work. :)