do you bleed

coming at me with your auspicious stares
breathing deeply, thinking I'm unaware
you'd actually think I wouldn't travel miles
to surcome to that peaceful smile
demons of pleasure hold me at bay
all I need is a key for this tiny cage
the good lord killed my baby
found that vein that keeps on draining
an angel is what I found in you
can you bleed like I currently do
do you cry early in the mornings
or does that joy last throughout the evening
do you bleed like this
can you breath without a single kiss
the darkness hides when you turn my way
the evil is scared of that agelic grace
living to die is how i see life
dieing to live is what's causing you strife
to be apart of your essence
always wanting me in your pressence
can this heal these wounds inside of me
I don't beleive you can bleed like me

Reviews

[KAREN BROWN]

This was very well written, a lot of emotion was put into this.I enjoyed your write keep writing.

[Jessi]

Awsome very nicely written i enjoyed reading it

[Bhavya Kaushik]

I loved this piece, It's been very beautifully written and specially the last lines..
Awesome!

[Brianna Brie]

coming at me with your auspicious stares
breathing deeply, thinking I'm unaware

I like the poetic feel to this one. It flows with pain, want and disappointment.

[Davia Lynn Bradley]

I love it, very powerful. I especially love the last line, it makes a nice conclusion to wondering thoughts. It sort of reminds me of the newest Linkin Park, like Hands Held High or something. Ver well written, welcome to the cafe.