Blue

Another 6 word poem for a contest

"What's wrong?"

"I wish I knew"

-l.r.

Reviews

[kronner'slove]

awww this is very short and yet a good expression of someone who is blue. Thanks for showing!

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!

[closed]

this leaves a world of imagination

though i guess i was more drawn to it because blue's my favorite color

interesting write though
i wonder what contest it was for




-Dream

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you, and it was for a contest for only 6 worded poems. I didn't win, but it was fun making this and my other 6 worded one.

[closed]

Yvw
That must have been tough I'll bet

[Kelsey Ann]

I love this little diddy. So much emotion packed into 6 words. Great piece!
:-) Also, would you mind reviewing my poem "The Rainbow"? It has a similar sentiment.

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you! and sure:)

[Frank]

There's nothing wrong
you just feel blue

[Roshan Nair]

Empathy is something every reader of this piece feel in one read and then smile knowing he's no the only questioning fool :)

[Justin Xavier Smith]

Well. I'm not entirely sure how to even begin reviewing this one. It's already longer than the poem. Point is, this is a feeling we all know very well.