What We Can Become

Though I am a young,

Naive and innocent one,

I have discovered so much

About what we must become

We mustn't be teachers,

Writers nor priests,

We must be knowledge,

Ideas, and beliefs

We must fill our brains,

Our fragile bones and our veins

We must pride ourselves

On the beauty we contain 

We cannot be defined

By our nickels and dimes

We shall pride ourselves

On the pure gold of our minds

Though I am a young,

Naive and innocent one,

I have so much faith

In what we can become

-l.r.

Reviews

[Nessie_AJ]

This is very...just strong. It shows a deep sense of maturity and very thoughtful and true! Love this! I love how it has this feeling of "innocence" but also "i'm innocent i see the good and the bad and I know we can overcome."

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you! I really appreciate your reviews as well!

[Angad Waraich]

Well, that is great. Love the rhyme scheme and the idea behind it.
Very well penned.

Well Done.
Thank you.
Angad

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Amy Rose]

That was brilliant, keep up the good work, I really liked it :)

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!

[Amy Rose]

Your most welcome! :)