Teach Me

Teach me how 

to live like you

with wide eyes

and colorful dreams

Teach me how

to find the world

ignore the bad

and see beauty

Teach me how

to think like you

with gold thoughts

and diamond heart

Teach me how

to love like you

and I'll learn

as I fall apart

-l.r.

Reviews

[ChrystalCompass]

This is beautiful, I love the imagery! You are a talented writer! :)

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you so much!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the contradiction at the end here..."and i'll learn/ as i fall apart?

really good line....i am past being able to be taught all this...seen too much, felt too much...can't ignore the bad...it is all part of what i am...but perhaps the speaker here can still find a rainbow.

jacob

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you for your review.

[little thoughts]

beautiful work. nice one girl !

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!

[FranciskaS]

I like this poem because it's what we al want. We want to learn.. and we will keep learning all our lives.
And I love the cadence..

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!

[Nidheesh]

It was a simple and nice poem....... It is actually u r asking nature to teach u or a person who has actually mastered in those things........ last 4 lines.... i liked too much........ especially last 2 lines....... that im dedicated to learn until i die...... hope so...... i got this meaning .... i mayb wrong too..... enjoyed the composition..... im not rating....... as im new...... but i do have a passion for it........All the best keep writing holla

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you, I appreciate your review and point of view on this:)

[Nidheesh Sankaran]

wellll on this what was ur idea of composition was it mother nature or a person???

[Lexi Richard]

Person, but I can definitely see how you would interpret it as mother nature