You're Not Special

you are not air

and you are not wind

you sure aren't the sun

or the heat from within

you aren't the sea

and not a single wave

you're nothing good

and sure as hell nothing great

you may think you're the king

or a heroic knight 

but you're just a boy-

a boy who's not bright

I pity your ignorance,

but then again I don't care

I will watch as you're fooled

and I'll feel no despair

I'm here to burst your ego

and tell you honestly,

you won't ever be special

and you are nothing to me

-l.r.

Reviews

[Nidheesh Sankaran]

Using nature as a weapon u said it all by putting it up into a poem.//// nice work........ Yes a got a picture regarding it......... Special things is something full of energy....... that actually gives energy....... not takes away ur energy or ur happiness........... hahahahhahahha thats the point........ moreover i liked the title thats y i randomnly selected this one to read........ Nicely done buddy!!!!!

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!

[Nidheesh Sankaran]

Gud gud!!!1

[SPINNING ON that dizzy ..]

Snap!

Haha - I guess you told him and he needed telling.

I wrote one that was the same kinda thing where I said what if I don't think about you as much as you think I do. Like, you can stop thinking you are that special.

You did this well! :)

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you so much!

[Justin]

alots of emotion in it, tells a really great story, keep it up :) :)

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you, Justin!

[Justin]

your welcome lexi!!!! i really enjoyed reading it!!!

[Saddam]

I'm here to burst your ego
and tell you honestly,
you won't ever be special
and you are nothing at all to me.

It is such a frastration for whom you talking about. Sure he will be tortured. But I feel special. An Awesome read dear.

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!