Disasters Within Me

My mind is full of thunderstorms

my heart holds tidal waves

my thoughts are like a tornado

talk like a hurricane

I am not a frail snowflake

or a subtle April breeze

I'm nothing like a wispy cloud

I am a tsunami

Treat me like a flower

and I'll treat you like the dirt

I am full of volcanoes

mess with me and get burnt

-l.r.

Reviews

[Anand Sehgal]

A very candid, warm and honest write :) Much love.
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[Lexi Richard]

Thank you :)

[Silent Heart]

Amazing !
This says a lot about you i think it's an awesome poem.

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you so much!

[Silent Heart]

You're welcome :D

[Lizardo]

I like the rhymes in the poem and I like the poem. Well done

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you.

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Simply amazing! great job!
Keep on writing!

C. Lee Battaglia

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you, I most certainly will!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Please read my story called The blonde girl. It's about my best friend that had cancer.
Your welcome!

[Lexi Richard]

Ok, I will definitely look into it.

[Nessie_AJ]

This is awesome! The voice is powerful & confident!

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!

[Justin]

that was really good, it was set up cool too :)

[Lexi Richard]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it:)

[Justin]

your welcome, keep it up :)

[Persona]

I like your idea of trying to mix weather types, but you're hitting me with lots of ideas without going into depth on any of them. I don't get the idea of treating someone like dirt in return for being treated nicely. You have a confident poetic voice.

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you! And what I meant by that is don't treat me a fragile/useless little thing that is nothing but a pretty face that you can walk all over. I understand your confusion.

[Stevo The POE-t]

I guess you can take the natural disasters in the world and turn them into our own personal feelings. With that being said I am a volcano 24/7... You did a really great job expressing the comparisons... This piece is filled with great imagery... This is a girl you do not wanna double cross because if you do you will wake up missing an arm or a leg... Great job girl

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you so much!

[Sami Khalil]

Very expressive and impressive...Bravo.................

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......................

[Jack Kennedy]

This reminds me of the works Eli and myself makes and I'm not trying to compare you to us (if that offends you or not) but I like the talk and the comparisons

[Lexi Richard]

Not offended at all, and thank you!