Not a Dime to Me

You sure can grin all you want

because I wasted precious time,

I often daydreamed about you,

but failed to call you mine

Luckily, that's no longer the case

you aren't worth a dime to me

you've managed to lose all my respect;

a difficult feat to achieve

So laugh because I was a fool

and I'll laugh because I know,

but now my eyes are open wide

and unlike you, I learned to grow

-l.r.

Reviews

[Justin]

that was really good, whenever you move on, you learn alot about yourself!!!

[Lexi Richard]

You sure do, thank you!

[Justin]

your welcome, if you ever need a friend i am here ;) the past is the past you make better memories!!

[Persona]

Good rhythm. I like the shape and the length of all the lines. The message itself though isn't great, because there are lots of poems on here about boyfriends or friends which people aren't happy with.

[Lexi Richard]

What do you think is wrong with the message?

[Katie Alexander]

The last stanza tied it together very well.

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!

[Kat Blair]

Haha. It's cheeky. I like it

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!

[Scott Metro]

Way to go girl...you don't need that in your life.
Well done Lexi.

Enjoyed it.
Scott

[Lexi Richard]

Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for your review.

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scott.....

[A. Amos]

So laugh because I was a fool
and I'll laugh because I know,
but now my eyes are open wide
and unlike you, I learned to grow

Good write my friend and last verse was simply amazing good job

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!