King of Hearts

I hate your silly grin

when you know I've proved you wrong

I hate your blueish eyes

that I've been lost in for so long

I hate your wittiness

when you try to show your brains

I hate your little quirks

your tapping makes me go insane

I hate your confidence

your aura

your very entity

I hate how I see you,

not a boy, but like a king

I hate how you've made my world

solely about you

I hate how I'm stuck in a trap

I knew I walked into

I sure do hate your blushing cheeks

how I crumble into dust

I hate how you're so in control

when my head's about to bust

I hate how this isn't your fault

how you don't have a clue

I hate that you're my everything

and I'm nothing to you

-l.r.

Reviews

[The StoryTeller]

Wow... at first I wasn't sure why you hated him, but now that makes total sense, feeling that you're nothing to him, when he means so so much to you. That is really deep. Is this from personal experience?

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you, and yes, unfortunately

[The StoryTeller]

Ouch, I've experienced this too (even as a guy) and I can testify that this totally sucks. I'm sorry you had to go through that, but beautiful writing!

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you !

[The StoryTeller]

No problem, I will try to review more of your work. If there's anything you specifically want me to read, send it in a read request. Keep writing! :)

[Katie Alexander]

Your work really reaches me(: I can so relate. Keep writing.

[Lexi Richard]

I most definitely will! Thank you.

[Anand Sehgal]

An awesome write with great personal touches. You have a nice power of observation.
hugs and love
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[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!