Milk

Kelsey - this is to you. (:

My strawberry milk does not taste as good

without reading your writing.

 

My strawberry milk will always taste better,

when I read your writing.

 

Your writing

makes me happy,

and brings me joy, just to read it.

 

My strawberry milk

is the other thing that makes me happy.

It rushed down my throat,

to the pattern of your poem.

 

My strawberry milk

and your writing

are the only things that keep me happy.

Author's Note

Kelsey, This is all about you... (:

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Strawberry milk and good poetry. Always a good day. I'm old. I prefer the strong coffee. Thank you for sharing the positive poetry.
Coyote

[Einstein Noodle]

what a wonderful perfect way to say thank you for strawberry milk ... the simple innocence of this delightful poem is truly a cool drink in a thirsty land... very nice Big A!
E.