Succint, yet powerful. Thus, this is commendable, except for a certain gap. It leaves me questioning whether the decision changes your fate, or whether accepting IS your fate. Even though my common sense as a person has the answer, the reader in me is left looking for more.
In simpler terms, your words leave two possibilities, two scopes of understanding:
1. "Not agreeing your decision is my choice, but being unable to do anyhing about it is fate"
2. "I may not agree with your decision, but it has sealed my fate."
Which is it? A few more words, or a couple of more specific ones, would help clear that up.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
I would have to say that it would be more of #2, I was meaning that the decision caused my fate to b.. read moreI would have to say that it would be more of #2, I was meaning that the decision caused my fate to be what it was - if that makes any sense.
11 Years Ago
Makes a lot of sense, really. But as I said, powerful as they are, the 14 words are slightly less th.. read moreMakes a lot of sense, really. But as I said, powerful as they are, the 14 words are slightly less than what you need to get the meaning through.
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