The Beat

A music inspired poem

 

My head, it sways

from side to side.

I listen to the music,

I start to glide.

The music is light,

now I am up on my feet.

I feel almost as if I am on the beach.

The sun is beating down on me,
I surely feel the heat.

But still I am upon that beach,

just moving to the beat.

Smooth, Cool, Fast, Strong,

I begin to feel inspired.

Now I know that surely,

I will begin to aspire.

The style of this music,

it truly is so neat.

But still, I owe it all to,

                                         this stout-hearted beat.                                                                                                   

Reviews

[Rainbow Rider]

Welcome to the Cafe Levi. Liked the poem, with one exception, the third to last line, "Is it truly is so neat" The wording there seems totally wrong. Maybe you did a typo, hopefully, cause the rest flows nicely, but this one line stops the reader in thier tracks, and we lose the flow. The rest is nicely done, I could fell myself inside the words and see what you wrote. Agian, welcome to the Cafe.

[Pen The Willows]

Good job, Levi. Was this for Stoler? I like it. The shape of the poem reminds me of a carrot for some reason. Maybe I've had too many Starbursts. I totally agree btw. I love music so much! Good job, again.

[shinybluestars03]

Awesome poem,
Yes music is such an inspiration for many things
you got that right it makes you go through different
transitions...
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing.

Best wishes

[Rhonda]

welcome levi. your poem is really nice. i feel that way too. music is my life. :)